[mpls] Updated rev -08 posted [Re: Suresh Krishnan's No Objection on draft-ietf-mpls-ldp-yang-07: (with COMMENT)]

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From: "Kamran Raza (skraza)" <skraza@cisco.com>
To: Suresh Krishnan <suresh@kaloom.com>, The IESG <iesg@ietf.org>
CC: "mpls@ietf.org" <mpls@ietf.org>, "mpls-chairs@ietf.org" <mpls-chairs@ietf.org>, "draft-ietf-mpls-ldp-yang@ietf.org" <draft-ietf-mpls-ldp-yang@ietf.org>
Thread-Topic: Updated rev -08 posted [Re: [mpls] Suresh Krishnan's No Objection on draft-ietf-mpls-ldp-yang-07: (with COMMENT)]
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Subject: [mpls] Updated rev -08 posted [Re: Suresh Krishnan's No Objection on draft-ietf-mpls-ldp-yang-07: (with COMMENT)]
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Suresh, Thanks for your review and comments.
We have posted a new rev -08 that takes care of your comments and comments from other rIESG eviewers.
On behalf of authors, please see further inline [skraza]:    
    

On 2019-12-04, 11:13 AM, "mpls on behalf of Suresh Krishnan via Datatracker" <mpls-bounces@ietf.org on behalf of noreply@ietf.org> wrote:

    
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    COMMENT:
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    I kind of figured out how this should work but is this formulation used in
    Figures 10,11 and 13 something well defined? I have not seen this before and a
    reread of RFC8340 did not help either
    
    +--ro ipv4 (or ipv6)
    
[skraza]: Fixed. Added text to highlight that similar tree exists for ipv6 as well.