Re: [mpls] I-D Action: draft-ietf-mpls-sfl-control-03.txt

Erik Auerswald <auerswald@fg-networking.de> Sat, 06 August 2022 10:40 UTC

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Subject: Re: [mpls] I-D Action: draft-ietf-mpls-sfl-control-03.txt
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Hi,

I think I noticed a typo in the abstract while reading the announcement:

On 06.08.22 11:56, internet-drafts@ietf.org wrote:
> [...]
> Abstract:
>     In RFC 8957 the concept of MPLS synonymos flow labels (SFL) was
>     introduced.  This document describes a simple control protocol that
>     runs over an associated control header to request, withdraw, and
>     extend the lifetime of such labels.  It is not the only control
>     protocol that might be used to support SFL, but it has the benefit of
>     being able to be used without modifying of the existing MPLS control
                                     ^^^^^^^^^^^^

I think that should be either "modifying" (without the "of"), or
"modification of".

>     protocols.  The existence of this design is not intended to restrict
>     the ability to enhance an existing MPLS control protocol to add a
>     similar capability.
> 
>     A Querier MUST wait a configured time (suggested wait of 60 seconds)
>     before re-attempting a Withdraw request.  No more than three Withdraw
>     requests SHOULD be made.  These restrictions are to prevent
>     overloading the control plane of the actioning router.
> [...]

Br,
Erik

[mpls] I-D Action: draft-ietf-mpls-sfl-control-03… internet-drafts
Re: [mpls] I-D Action: draft-ietf-mpls-sfl-contro… Erik Auerswald