Re: [mpls] Barry Leiba's No Objection on draft-ietf-mpls-ri-rsvp-frr-07: (with COMMENT)
Barry Leiba <barryleiba@computer.org> Thu, 05 December 2019 13:42 UTC
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From: Barry Leiba <barryleiba@computer.org>
Date: Thu, 05 Dec 2019 08:42:37 -0500
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Subject: Re: [mpls] Barry Leiba's No Objection on draft-ietf-mpls-ri-rsvp-frr-07: (with COMMENT)
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Great; thanks, Chandra! Barry On Thu, Dec 5, 2019 at 12:40 AM Chandrasekar Ramachandran <csekar@juniper.net> wrote: > > Hi Barry, > The comments from the genart review were on similar lines and hence this will be addressed in the next revision of the document. > > Thanks, > Chandra. > > > Juniper Business Use Only > > > -----Original Message----- > > From: Barry Leiba via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> > > Sent: Thursday, December 5, 2019 9:07 AM > > To: The IESG <iesg@ietf.org> > > Cc: draft-ietf-mpls-ri-rsvp-frr@ietf.org; Nicolai Leymann > > <n.leymann@telekom.de>; mpls-chairs@ietf.org; n.leymann@telekom.de; > > mpls@ietf.org > > Subject: Barry Leiba's No Objection on draft-ietf-mpls-ri-rsvp-frr-07: (with > > COMMENT) > > > > Barry Leiba has entered the following ballot position for > > draft-ietf-mpls-ri-rsvp-frr-07: No Objection > > > > When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all email > > addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this introductory > > paragraph, however.) > > > > > > Please refer to > > https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.ietf.org/iesg/statement/discuss- > > criteria.html__;!8WoA6RjC81c!Q7oqkA5dvZatD7KNGVCXg3JwdABbNaU6rbl > > DHRPyNykUuTJFBosnLFveVo0lcmI$ > > for more information about IESG DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. > > > > > > The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: > > https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf- > > mpls-ri-rsvp- > > frr/__;!8WoA6RjC81c!Q7oqkA5dvZatD7KNGVCXg3JwdABbNaU6rblDHRPyNy > > kUuTJFBosnLFveul8Thf8$ > > > > > > > > ---------------------------------------------------------------------- > > COMMENT: > > ---------------------------------------------------------------------- > > > > There are numerous problems with the use and absence of articles (“the”, > > “a”, > > “an”) throughout the document: articles are missing when they should be > > there, > > “the” is used when an indefinite article should be, and so on. That made it a > > harder read than it should have been. The RPC will fix it during editing, but > > maybe the AD should add an RFC Editor Note to alert them to be particularly > > watchful for these issues. > >
- [mpls] Barry Leiba's No Objection on draft-ietf-m… Barry Leiba via Datatracker
- Re: [mpls] Barry Leiba's No Objection on draft-ie… Chandrasekar Ramachandran
- Re: [mpls] Barry Leiba's No Objection on draft-ie… Barry Leiba