[mpls] [Gen-art] Review: draft-ietf-mpls-ldp-multi-topology-09.txt
"Joel M. Halpern" <jmh@joelhalpern.com> Fri, 18 October 2013 09:31 UTC
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Subject: [mpls] [Gen-art] Review: draft-ietf-mpls-ldp-multi-topology-09.txt
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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-mpls-ldp-multi-topology-09.txt LDP Extensions for Multi Topology Routing Reviewer: Joel M. Halpern Review Date: 18-October-2013 IETF LC End Date: 6-November-2013 IESG Telechat date: N/A Summary: This document is nearly ready for publication as a Proposed Standard RFC. I believe there is one major issue that is easily addressed. Major issues: I may have simply missed this reviewing the document, but as far as I can tell there is no specification of the relationship between the MT-IDs in this document and the MT-IDs used elsewhere. Yes, I can take a guess at the intent. But is it stated somewhere that these are the same IDs negotiated in the relevant IGP? Or is there some other intent? Minor issues: Nits/editorial comments: I find it odd that the MT-ID follows the IP prefix in the various formats. Yes, the computer can parse both. But since we tend to think in Network byte order, I expect more significant information (MT-ID) to occur before less significant information (IP prefix within topology.)
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