Re: [mpls] Working Group Last Call on draft-ietf-mpls-ldp-dod

[Lizhong Jin <[e-mail]>]

Hi Maciek,
Thanks for the update. I am fine with the text now.

BR
Lizhong


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> Date: Sat, 2 Feb 2013 20:20:25 +0000
> From: "Maciek Konstantynowicz (mkonstan)" <[e-mail]>
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> Lizhong,
>
> Many thanks for your review.
>
> We have modified the text of the draft to reflect your suggestions. Will
> publish updated version shortly.
> Pls let us know if any further comments.
>
> More inline [mk]
>
> Thanks,
> Maciek.
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> On 11 Jan 2013, at 15:42, Lizhong Jin wrote:
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>
> Hi Loa,
> I review this draft, and overall, it is well written. And I have following
> comments:
> 1. there is protocol extention in this draft. Should it be standard track
> instead of information?
>
> [mk] We consider the proposed LDP TLV extension as minor. Let the WG
> decide if this warrants changing the status to standard track.
>
> 2. section 3, it says this draft will be updated once
> [I-D.ietf-mpls-ldp-ipv6] is advanced. Does that mean this last call should
> be after [I-D.ietf-mpls-ldp-ipv6], or should we just remove this sentance?
>
> [mk] New text:
>
>    This document is focusing on IPv4 LDP DoD procedures.  Similar
>    procedures will apply to IPv6 LDP DoD [I-D.ietf-mpls-ldp-ipv6].
>
> 3. section 3.1.1, it says:
> Downstream AN/AGN1x should respond to the label request from the
>    upstream AN/AGN1x with a label mapping (if requested route is present
>    in its RIB, and there is a valid label binding from its downstream)
> I think more acurate saying of the last sentance would be "if requested
> route is present in its RIB, and there is a valid label binding from its
> downstream or it is the egress node".
>
> [mk] New text:
>
>    Downstream AN/AGN1x should respond to the label request from the
>    upstream AN/AGN1x with a label mapping if requested route is present
>    in its RIB, and there is a valid label binding from its downstream or
>    it is the egress node.
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>
> Thanks
> Lizhong
>
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> > Date: Wed, 19 Dec 2012 09:25:44 +0100
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> > Working Group,
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> > This is to start a working group last call on
> > draft-ietf-mpls-ldp-dod-03. This working last call is extended
> > due to the upcoming holidays.
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> > Please send your comments to the mpls working group mailing
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> > Please send both technical comments, and if you are happy with the
> > document as is also indications of support.
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> > There are no IPR claims against this draft.
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> > All the co-authors has stated that they are not ware of any IPRs.
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> > This working group last call will end on January 15, 2013.
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> > /Loa
> > for the wg co-chairs
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