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Re: [mpls] RtgDir review: draft-ietf-mpls-rsvp-shared-labels-05.txt

Vishnu Pavan Beeram <vishnupavan@gmail.com> Wed, 21 November 2018 05:36 UTC

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From: Vishnu Pavan Beeram <vishnupavan@gmail.com>
Date: Wed, 21 Nov 2018 00:36:15 -0500
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Subject: Re: [mpls] RtgDir review: draft-ietf-mpls-rsvp-shared-labels-05.txt
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Stig, Hi!

Much Thanks for the review! The latest version of the draft fixes the typo
specified below (Diff --
https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-mpls-rsvp-shared-labels-06).

Regards,
-Pavan (on behalf of the authors)

On Tue, Nov 20, 2018 at 1:36 PM Stig Venaas <stig@venaas.com> wrote:

> Hello,
>
> I have been selected as the Routing Directorate reviewer for this
> draft. The Routing Directorate seeks to review all routing or
> routing-related drafts as they pass through IETF last call and IESG
> review, and sometimes on special request. The purpose of the review is
> to provide assistance to the Routing ADs. For more information about
> the Routing Directorate, please see
> http://trac.tools.ietf.org/area/rtg/trac/wiki/RtgDir
>
> Although these comments are primarily for the use of the Routing ADs,
> it would be helpful if you could consider them along with any other
> IETF Last Call comments that you receive, and strive to resolve them
> through discussion or by updating the draft.
>
> Document: draft-ietf-mpls-rsvp-shared-labels-05.txt
> Reviewer: Stig Venaas
> Review Date: November 20, 2018
> IETF LC End Date:
> Intended Status: Standards Track
>
> Summary:
> No issues found. This document is ready for publication.
>
> Comments:
> The document is very well written. It is quite easy to read and of
> good quality. I could not find any issues, except the nit mentioned
> below.
>
> Major Issues:
> No major issues found.
>
> Minor Issues:
> No minor issues found.
>
> Nits:
> I found one typo at the end of 9.4. The word "failurei".
>
> Regards,
> Stig
>
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