Re: [mpls] Updated rev -08 posted [Re: Roman Danyliw's Discuss on draft-ietf-mpls-ldp-yang-07: (with DISCUSS and COMMENT)]

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From: tom petch <ietfc@btconnect.com>
To: "Kamran Raza (skraza)" <skraza=40cisco.com@dmarc.ietf.org>, Roman Danyliw <rdd@cert.org>, The IESG <iesg@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [mpls] Updated rev -08 posted [Re: Roman Danyliw's Discuss on draft-ietf-mpls-ldp-yang-07: (with DISCUSS and COMMENT)]
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From: mpls <mpls-bounces@ietf.org> on behalf of Kamran Raza (skraza) <skraza=40cisco.com@dmarc.ietf.org>
Sent: 28 February 2020 04:28


Nothing to do with Roman's comments but

RFC7277 is referenced in the YANG module but is absent from the I-D References

Tom Petch




Thanks for your review Roman.
We have posted a new rev -08 that takes care your comments and comments from other IESG reviewers.
On behalf of authors, Please see inline [skraza]:

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    DISCUSS:
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    Thank you for using the YANG Security Considerations template.  Could you
    please provide more details on which nodes are sensitive to write and read
    issues; and the RPC operations of concern.  For example, see
    draft-ietf-isis-yang-isis-cfg or draft-ietf-ospf-yang.

[skraza]: Done. Please see significantly enhanced section in the posted rev -08.

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    COMMENT:
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    A few trivial editorial nits:
[skraza]: Have fixed all those.


    * Section 1.1. Typo.  s/minumum/minimum/
    * Section 1.1.  Typo. s/catogories/categories/
    * Section 1.1.  Typo. s/higlighting/highlighting/
    * Section 3.0.  Typo. s/grapically/graphically/
    * Section 5.2.1.  Typo. s/an network-instance/a network-instance/


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