[mpls] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-mpls-rfc6374-sr-11
Roni Even via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Mon, 02 September 2024 03:43 UTC
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Reviewer: Roni Even Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://wiki.ietf.org/en/group/gen/GenArtFAQ>. Document: draft-ietf-mpls-rfc6374-sr-?? Reviewer: Roni Even Review Date: 2024-09-01 IETF LC End Date: 2024-09-06 IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat Summary: The document is ready to be published as a standard track rFC with nits Major issues: Minor issues: Nits/editorial comments: In section 4.2.2 first paragraph “ the response messages are preferred to be sent back in-band on the same link ” do you mean “the response messages SHOULD be sent …”
- [mpls] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-mpls… Roni Even via Datatracker
- [mpls] Re: Genart last call review of draft-ietf-… Rakesh Gandhi