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"Joel M. Halpern" <jmh@joelhalpern.com> Thu, 24 April 2014 21:55 UTC

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Subject: [mpls] [Gen-art] review: draft-ietf-mpls-extended-admin-group-05
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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on
Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at

<http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.

Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
you may receive.

Document: draft-ietf-mpls-extended-admin-group-05
     Extended Administrative Groups in MPLS-TE
Reviewer: Joel M. Halpern
Review Date: 24-April-2014
IETF LC End Date: 06-May-2014
IESG Telechat date: N/A

Summary: This document is ready for publication as a Proposed Standards RFC

Major issues: N/A

Minor issues:
     I believe that the description of when to use this EAG is slightly 
misleading.  The text says that EAG is to be used "when a node wishes to 
advertise more than 32 colors for a link."  I believe it is more 
accurate to say that it is to be used "when a node wishes to advertise 
colors for a link which are not represented in the first 32 bits of the 
color mask."  The node may only wish to advertise colors 7 and 60, but 
that will require the EAG.

Nits/editorial comments: N/A

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