Re: [mpls] Typos and editing in draft-ietf-mpls-tp-te-mib-03
Venkatesan Mahalingam <venkat.mahalingams@gmail.com> Thu, 07 June 2012 22:35 UTC
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From: Venkatesan Mahalingam <venkat.mahalingams@gmail.com>
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Subject: Re: [mpls] Typos and editing in draft-ietf-mpls-tp-te-mib-03
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Hi, Thanks for your comments, we will fix typos and indentation in the next version. Regards, Venkat. On Thu, Jun 7, 2012 at 9:34 AM, Muly Ilan <muly_i@rad.com> wrote: > Hi, > > > > Sorry for the very late response. Only noticed it now. > > > > 1. Section 9.2.6 should be renamed to “Reverse direction > mplsTunnelEntry” instead of “Forward direction mplsTunnelEntry”. > > 2. Missing CRs in section 9.2.8 causing indentation problems. > > 3. In section 9.2.10 change “mplsXCExtTunnelPointer = > mplsTunnelName.1.1.1.2” to “mplsXCExtTunnelPointer = > mplsTunnelName.2.1.2.1”. > > > > > > Muly
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