Re: [mpls] AD review for https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-mpls-egress-tlv-for-nil-fec/

Shraddha Hegde <shraddha@juniper.net> Fri, 03 May 2024 15:01 UTC

From: Shraddha Hegde <shraddha@juniper.net>
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Hi James,

Thanks for the review.
I have updated reference with draft-ietf-idr-sr-policy-safi as that document has
All the details needed to reference in this document.
I am posting -13 with changes.

Rgds
Shraddha




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Subject: AD review for https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-mpls-egress-tlv-for-nil-fec/

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Dear Authors:

Thank you for this document. I have completed my review and have the following comment:


Section 4.1.1: The reference [I.D-ietf-idr-segment-routing-te-policy] is an expired draft that is replaced by https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-idr-sr-policy-safi/<https://urldefense.com/v3/__https:/datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-idr-sr-policy-safi/__;!!NEt6yMaO-gk!ExUYklkTDiT3dJBP6nhQXKpU2tJX7poEnC36sPikT41y0BhfjQbHgaUQOv6oIpPERkq5VRVWplkr8Q5VtrBqeQQ1n_nW23M$> and https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-sr-segtypes-ext/<https://urldefense.com/v3/__https:/datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-sr-segtypes-ext/__;!!NEt6yMaO-gk!ExUYklkTDiT3dJBP6nhQXKpU2tJX7poEnC36sPikT41y0BhfjQbHgaUQOv6oIpPERkq5VRVWplkr8Q5VtrBqeQQ1kKYV-8E$>. Please correct the reference to point to these active drafts. Please also correct the reference to the same expired draft in section 4.1.2.

Please review and update the document where necessary and post a new version.

Thanks!

Jim

[mpls] AD review for https://datatracker.ietf.org… James Guichard
Re: [mpls] AD review for https://datatracker.ietf… Shraddha Hegde