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"BRUNGARD, DEBORAH A" <db3546@att.com> Fri, 17 August 2018 20:19 UTC

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From: "BRUNGARD, DEBORAH A" <db3546@att.com>
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Subject: [mpls] AD review of draft-ietf-mpls-lsp-ping-lag-multipath
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Hi Authors,

I've reviewed your draft before starting IETF Last Call:


  *   my major concern is the readability - grammar, sentence clarity. I've done a mark up of the document which I will send to the authors with my suggestions. I think reviewers in the other areas will have a difficult time if we don't improve it.
  *   The template for requirements language now includes reference to RFC8174. I've noted it in the mark up.
  *   I noted some gaps on "what happens if not supported" that need to be clarified.

Thanks!
Deborah

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