[mpls] Mirja Kühlewind's No Objection on draft-ietf-mpls-tp-temporal-hitless-psm-13: (with COMMENT)

[Mirja Kühlewind <[e-mail]>]

Mirja Kühlewind has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-mpls-tp-temporal-hitless-psm-13: No Objection

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COMMENT:
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I don't see a value in publishing this document in the RFC series. Btw.
the shepherd write up still says this doc is standards track.

Minor comments:
- The classification into M(andatory) and O(ptional) is not consistent
with the use of MUST and SHOULD.
- The first sentence in the intro should use a lower case 'must'.
- Sections 2.2 and 5. could be removed.