[mpls] Roman Danyliw's No Objection on draft-ietf-mpls-sfl-framework-10: (with COMMENT)
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Subject: [mpls] Roman Danyliw's No Objection on draft-ietf-mpls-sfl-framework-10: (with COMMENT)
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Roman Danyliw has entered the following ballot position for draft-ietf-mpls-sfl-framework-10: No Objection When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this introductory paragraph, however.) Please refer to https://www.ietf.org/iesg/statement/discuss-criteria.html for more information about IESG DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-mpls-sfl-framework/ ---------------------------------------------------------------------- COMMENT: ---------------------------------------------------------------------- Thank you for responding to the SECDIR review (and thank you to Tero Kivinen for doing it) I had the same reaction as Martin Duke – I found one RFC2119/normative phrase in the document (Section 5). I’m not sure if this means it should be information or normative requirements should be articulated more clearly. The reviews TSVART and Ben Kaduk already capture my feedback on Sections 6 and 7. ** Section 3. What is “triggering IPFIX inspection”? I wasn’t familiar with this phrasing. Is the intent to trigger more in-depth analysis of header information, as opposed to “triggering … DPI”, which will do content inspection? ** Editorial Nits: -- Section 3. Typo. s/co-ordinating/coordinating/ -- Section 4.1. Typo. s/are present/is present/ -- Section 5. Typo. s/invalidate the certain uses/invalidate certain uses/
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