[mpls] Murray Kucherawy's No Objection on draft-ietf-mpls-sfl-framework-10: (with COMMENT)

Murray Kucherawy via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Tue, 22 September 2020 06:32 UTC

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Subject: [mpls] Murray Kucherawy's No Objection on draft-ietf-mpls-sfl-framework-10: (with COMMENT)

Murray Kucherawy has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-mpls-sfl-framework-10: No Objection

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COMMENT:
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In Section 4.1.1, "LSE" should be expanded on first use.  Also in that section,
"the SFL MAY be to some other value" is missing the word "set".

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