Re: [mpls] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC8287 (6101)

"Carlos Pignataro (cpignata)" <cpignata@cisco.com> Mon, 13 April 2020 14:06 UTC

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From: "Carlos Pignataro (cpignata)" <cpignata@cisco.com>
To: RFC Editor <rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org>
CC: "Nagendra Kumar Nainar (naikumar)" <naikumar@cisco.com>, George Swallow <swallow.ietf@gmail.com>, Nobo Akiya <nobo.akiya.dev@gmail.com>, "sriganeshkini@gmail.com" <sriganeshkini@gmail.com>, Mach Chen <mach.chen@huawei.com>, Deborah Brungard <db3546@att.com>, Alvaro Retana <aretana.ietf@gmail.com>, Martin Vigoureux <martin.vigoureux@nokia.com>, Loa Andersson <loa@pi.nu>, Nicolai Leymann <n.leymann@telekom.de>, "tsaad.net@gmail.com" <tsaad.net@gmail.com>, Alexander Vainshtein <alexander.vainshtein@ecitele.com>, mpls <mpls@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [mpls] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC8287 (6101)
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IMHO, this should be accepted. Not sure how we missed it!

Frankly, “POP” should be “pop” as it’s not an acronym.

Thanks,

Carlos.

> 2020/04/13 午前7:17、RFC Errata System <rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org>のメール:
> 
> The following errata report has been submitted for RFC8287,
> "Label Switched Path (LSP) Ping/Traceroute for Segment Routing (SR) IGP-Prefix and IGP-Adjacency Segment Identifiers (SIDs) with MPLS Data Planes".
> 
> --------------------------------------
> You may review the report below and at:
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/errata/eid6101
> 
> --------------------------------------
> Type: Editorial
> Reported by: Alexander ("Sasha") Vainshtein <alexander.vainshtein@ecitele.com>
> 
> Section: 7.2
> 
> Original Text
> -------------
>   The network node that advertised the Node Segment ID is responsible
>   for generating a FEC Stack Change sub-TLV with the Post Office
>   Protocol (POP) operation type for the Node Segment ID, regardless of
>   whether or not Penultimate Hop Popping (PHP) is enabled.
> 
> 
> Corrected Text
> --------------
>   The network node that advertised the Node Segment ID is responsible
>   for generating a FEC Stack Change sub-TLV with the   POP) operation type for 
>   the Node Segment ID, regardless of whether or not Penultimate Hop Popping 
>   (PHP) is enabled.
> 
> 
> Notes
> -----
> Expansion of POP to "Post Office Protocol" in the context of this document is wrong.
> 
> Instructions:
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> 
> --------------------------------------
> RFC8287 (draft-ietf-mpls-spring-lsp-ping-13)
> --------------------------------------
> Title               : Label Switched Path (LSP) Ping/Traceroute for Segment Routing (SR) IGP-Prefix and IGP-Adjacency Segment Identifiers (SIDs) with MPLS Data Planes
> Publication Date    : December 2017
> Author(s)           : N. Kumar, Ed., C. Pignataro, Ed., G. Swallow, N. Akiya, S. Kini, M. Chen
> Category            : PROPOSED STANDARD
> Source              : Multiprotocol Label Switching
> Area                : Routing
> Stream              : IETF
> Verifying Party     : IESG