Re: [mpls] Rtgdir early review of draft-ietf-mpls-lsp-ping-ospfv3-codepoint-04

"Nagendra Kumar Nainar (naikumar)" <naikumar@cisco.com> Tue, 31 August 2021 20:23 UTC

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From: "Nagendra Kumar Nainar (naikumar)" <naikumar@cisco.com>
To: Matthew Bocci <matthew.bocci@nokia.com>, "rtg-dir@ietf.org" <rtg-dir@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [mpls] Rtgdir early review of draft-ietf-mpls-lsp-ping-ospfv3-codepoint-04
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Hi Matthew,

Thank you for the review and apologies for the delay in the response. We will fix this in the revision that we will submit soon.

Thanks,
Nagendra


From: Matthew Bocci via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org>
Date: Tuesday, June 22, 2021 at 6:16 AM
To: rtg-dir@ietf.org <rtg-dir@ietf.org>
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Subject: Rtgdir early review of draft-ietf-mpls-lsp-ping-ospfv3-codepoint-04
Reviewer: Matthew Bocci
Review result: Has Nits

I have been selected as the RTG DIR reviewer for
draft-ietf-mpls-lsp-ping-ospfv3-codepoint.

Thanks for the draft. This is clear and well written. I have just a couple of
minor editorial nits, below, that should be fixed prior to publication.

Regards
Matthew

Abstract:
s/Segment SUb-TLV/Segment Sub-TLV

1. Introduction
s/"Protocol in the Segment IS Sub-TLV"/"Protocol in the Segment ID Sub-TLV"