Re: [mpls] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-mpls-lsp-ping-ospfv3-codepoint-04

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From: "Nagendra Kumar Nainar (naikumar)" <naikumar@cisco.com>
To: Christer Holmberg <christer.holmberg@ericsson.com>, "gen-art@ietf.org" <gen-art@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [mpls] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-mpls-lsp-ping-ospfv3-codepoint-04
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Hi Christer,

Thank you for the detailed review and apologies for the very late response. Please find the response below:


Q1:

The Abstract and Introductions says:

   "This document proposes the code point to be used in the Segment ID
     Sub-TLV and Downstream Detailed Mapping TLV when the IGP is OSPFv3."

I suggest to say "specifies" or "defines" instead of "proposes".


<Authors> Sure. We will update the same.

Q2:

Would it be more clear to call Section 6 "Update to RFC 8287"?


<Authors> Ok.

Q3:

Section 6 says:

   "This document specifies that the above code points will be used only for
   OSPFv2."

I suggest to be more explicit, and say something like:

   "This document updates RFC 8287, by specifying that the "OSPF" code points
   will be used only for OSPFv2."


<Authors> Ok.

Q4:

Section 7.2 adds a note to the IANA registry for the existing "OSPF" code
point. Should this specification also be added as a reference for the existing
"OSPF" code point (in addition to RFC 8287?


<Authors>It already includes the code point as below:

“IANA is also requested to add a note for the existing entry for code
   point 1 (OSPF) to read: - "To be used for OSPFv2 only".
“
Please let us know if you are referring to something else.

Thanks,
Nagendra


Thanks,
Nagendra


From: Christer Holmberg via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org>
Date: Friday, June 11, 2021 at 3:58 AM
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Subject: Genart last call review of draft-ietf-mpls-lsp-ping-ospfv3-codepoint-04
Reviewer: Christer Holmberg
Review result: Almost Ready

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Document: draft-ietf-mpls-lsp-ping-ospfv3-codepoint-04
Reviewer: Christer Holmberg
Review Date: 2021-06-11
IETF LC End Date: 2021-06-21
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary: The document is easy to read, and is almost ready for publication.
However, I do have a few editorial comments that I would like the authors to
address.

Major issues: N/A

Minor issues: N/A

Nits/editorial comments:

Q1:

The Abstract and Introductions says:

   "This document proposes the code point to be used in the Segment ID
     Sub-TLV and Downstream Detailed Mapping TLV when the IGP is OSPFv3."

I suggest to say "specifies" or "defines" instead of "proposes".

Q2:

Would it be more clear to call Section 6 "Update to RFC 8287"?

Q3:

Section 6 says:

   "This document specifies that the above code points will be used only for
   OSPFv2."

I suggest to be more explicit, and say something like:

   "This document updates RFC 8287, by specifying that the "OSPF" code points
   will be used only for OSPFv2."

Q4:

Section 7.2 adds a note to the IANA registry for the existing "OSPF" code
point. Should this specification also be added as a reference for the existing
"OSPF" code point (in addition to RFC 8287?