Re: [mpls] [Technical Errata Reported] RFC6428 (3629)

David Allan I <david.i.allan@ericsson.com> Wed, 15 July 2015 15:53 UTC

Return-Path: <david.i.allan@ericsson.com>
X-Original-To: mpls@ietfa.amsl.com
Delivered-To: mpls@ietfa.amsl.com
Received: from localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id B12981B2DB4 for <mpls@ietfa.amsl.com>; Wed, 15 Jul 2015 08:53:07 -0700 (PDT)
X-Virus-Scanned: amavisd-new at amsl.com
X-Spam-Flag: NO
X-Spam-Score: -4.201
X-Spam-Level:
X-Spam-Status: No, score=-4.201 tagged_above=-999 required=5 tests=[BAYES_00=-1.9, RCVD_IN_DNSWL_MED=-2.3, SPF_PASS=-0.001] autolearn=ham
Received: from mail.ietf.org ([4.31.198.44]) by localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) (amavisd-new, port 10024) with ESMTP id PH4ElhJ55C3U for <mpls@ietfa.amsl.com>; Wed, 15 Jul 2015 08:53:01 -0700 (PDT)
Received: from usevmg20.ericsson.net (usevmg20.ericsson.net [198.24.6.45]) (using TLSv1 with cipher DHE-RSA-AES256-SHA (256/256 bits)) (No client certificate requested) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 96BD51B2DB0 for <mpls@ietf.org>; Wed, 15 Jul 2015 08:53:01 -0700 (PDT)
X-AuditID: c618062d-f799e6d00000329e-b7-55a6264fa5ed
Received: from EUSAAHC007.ericsson.se (Unknown_Domain [147.117.188.93]) by usevmg20.ericsson.net (Symantec Mail Security) with SMTP id 51.85.12958.F4626A55; Wed, 15 Jul 2015 11:22:24 +0200 (CEST)
Received: from EUSAAMB105.ericsson.se ([147.117.188.122]) by EUSAAHC007.ericsson.se ([147.117.188.93]) with mapi id 14.03.0210.002; Wed, 15 Jul 2015 11:53:00 -0400
From: David Allan I <david.i.allan@ericsson.com>
To: Loa Andersson <loa@pi.nu>, RFC Errata System <rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org>, "swallow@cisco.com" <swallow@cisco.com>, "jdrake@juniper.net" <jdrake@juniper.net>, "stbryant@cisco.com" <stbryant@cisco.com>, "adrian@olddog.co.uk" <adrian@olddog.co.uk>, "rcallon@juniper.net" <rcallon@juniper.net>
Thread-Topic: [Technical Errata Reported] RFC6428 (3629)
Thread-Index: AQHQvstW9HWDn5A1sUWePH/SGh8pEZ3crhtw
Date: Wed, 15 Jul 2015 15:52:59 +0000
Message-ID: <E6C17D2345AC7A45B7D054D407AA205C4AF13A1D@eusaamb105.ericsson.se>
References: <20130521141350.EF4F862100@rfc-editor.org> <55A60407.9060108@pi.nu>
In-Reply-To: <55A60407.9060108@pi.nu>
Accept-Language: en-US
Content-Language: en-US
X-MS-Has-Attach:
X-MS-TNEF-Correlator:
x-originating-ip: [147.117.188.11]
Content-Type: text/plain; charset="us-ascii"
Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable
MIME-Version: 1.0
X-Brightmail-Tracker: H4sIAAAAAAAAA+NgFprDIsWRmVeSWpSXmKPExsUyuXRPrG6A2rJQg5eLmC1+9NxgtngybRab xZy7zhb/5s5htri1dCWrxd8VV1gsmvZ/ZbM493QOo8XtKU2MDpweU35vZPVYsuQnk8f1pqvs HkdvzmX2WLF5JaPHrOltbB4NbcdYA9ijuGxSUnMyy1KL9O0SuDIu33nGXrBWpGLWqwmsDYwz BLoYOTkkBEwktl48ygxhi0lcuLeerYuRi0NI4CijxNYNe9ghnOWMEpNm7gWrYhMwkNjz/wsj SEJEYC2TRF93N1iCWSBOYta6C4wgtrCAucTTfc+AujmAiiwkzm50AwmLCBhJfH24BKycRUBV 4sODj2A2r4CvxJJzZ9hAbCGBQIkL5/YwgdicQDUrmvazgNiMQNd9P7WGCWKVuMStJ/OZIK4W kFiy5zzUB6ISLx//Y4WwlSQ+/p7PDlGvI7Fg9yc2CFtbYtnC11B7BSVOznzCMoFRbBaSsbOQ tMxC0jILScsCRpZVjBylxalluelGBpsYgdF5TIJNdwfjnpeWhxgFOBiVeHgV/JaGCrEmlhVX 5h5ilOZgURLndYzKCxUSSE8sSc1OTS1ILYovKs1JLT7EyMTBKdXAuHLn/cx1c1fKHjy0Zt6G Bsm3mU0Mh8808D8trxb0maBhnb2CJ6A+pug/py5T2SSFSzunnDnU9H+qk9t/nQPv8y4u2Phr w4444XnPrkcWTjNVemNqnt30z2nvjQtrJRM5J4jJn/C58uPWwf0q3HzpIl+S91bulHM6qRGx 3XnznuNd5tJfb55itVRiKc5INNRiLipOBABDraQ1rwIAAA==
Archived-At: <http://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/mpls/X6LtxQW_QozVeE2MGScqevLaz_Q>
Cc: "mpls@ietf.org" <mpls@ietf.org>, "alan.davey@metaswitch.com" <alan.davey@metaswitch.com>
Subject: Re: [mpls] [Technical Errata Reported] RFC6428 (3629)
X-BeenThere: mpls@ietf.org
X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.15
Precedence: list
List-Id: Multi-Protocol Label Switching WG <mpls.ietf.org>
List-Unsubscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/options/mpls>, <mailto:mpls-request@ietf.org?subject=unsubscribe>
List-Archive: <https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/browse/mpls/>
List-Post: <mailto:mpls@ietf.org>
List-Help: <mailto:mpls-request@ietf.org?subject=help>
List-Subscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/mpls>, <mailto:mpls-request@ietf.org?subject=subscribe>
X-List-Received-Date: Wed, 15 Jul 2015 15:53:07 -0000

The problem in the original text is the enumeration of fields and references in the TLV encompassed by the length is split over two sentences. So the proposed errata does make it clearer and would be better than simply munging the two sentences together....

So I'm good with it

Cheers
D

-----Original Message-----
From: Loa Andersson [mailto:loa@pi.nu] 
Sent: Tuesday, July 14, 2015 11:56 PM
To: RFC Errata System; David Allan I; swallow@cisco.com; jdrake@juniper.net; stbryant@cisco.com; adrian@olddog.co.uk; rcallon@juniper.net
Cc: alan.davey@metaswitch.com; mpls@ietf.org
Subject: Re: [Technical Errata Reported] RFC6428 (3629)

Folks,

The errata seems correct, but I'd like the authors to nod also :), John, George and/or Dave.

/Loa

On 2013-05-21 16:13, RFC Errata System wrote:
> The following errata report has been submitted for RFC6428, "Proactive 
> Connectivity Verification, Continuity Check, and Remote Defect Indication for the MPLS Transport Profile".
>
> --------------------------------------
> You may review the report below and at:
> http://www.rfc-editor.org/errata_search.php?rfc=6428&eid=3629
>
> --------------------------------------
> Type: Technical
> Reported by: Alan Davey <alan.davey@metaswitch.com>
>
> Section: 3.5.3
>
> Original Text
> -------------
> The length is the length of the following data: the Global_ID, Node Identifier, and Attachment Circuit ID (AC_ID) are as per [9].
>
>
> Corrected Text
> --------------
> The length is the length of the data following the length field.  The Global_ID, Node Identifier, and Attachment Circuit ID (AC_ID) are as per [9].
>
>
> Notes
> -----
>
>
> Instructions:
> -------------
> This errata is currently posted as "Reported". If necessary, please 
> use "Reply All" to discuss whether it should be verified or rejected. 
> When a decision is reached, the verifying party (IESG) can log in to 
> change the status and edit the report, if necessary.
>
> --------------------------------------
> RFC6428 (draft-ietf-mpls-tp-cc-cv-rdi-06)
> --------------------------------------
> Title               : Proactive Connectivity Verification, Continuity Check, and Remote Defect Indication for the MPLS Transport Profile
> Publication Date    : November 2011
> Author(s)           : D. Allan, Ed., G. Swallow Ed., J. Drake Ed.
> Category            : PROPOSED STANDARD
> Source              : Multiprotocol Label Switching
> Area                : Routing
> Stream              : IETF
> Verifying Party     : IESG
>