[mpls] Updated rev -08 posted [Re: Roman Danyliw's Discuss on draft-ietf-mpls-ldp-yang-07: (with DISCUSS and COMMENT)]

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From: "Kamran Raza (skraza)" <skraza@cisco.com>
To: Roman Danyliw <rdd@cert.org>, The IESG <iesg@ietf.org>
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Thread-Topic: Updated rev -08 posted [Re: [mpls] Roman Danyliw's Discuss on draft-ietf-mpls-ldp-yang-07: (with DISCUSS and COMMENT)]
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Subject: [mpls] Updated rev -08 posted [Re: Roman Danyliw's Discuss on draft-ietf-mpls-ldp-yang-07: (with DISCUSS and COMMENT)]
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Thanks for your review Roman. 
We have posted a new rev -08 that takes care your comments and comments from other IESG reviewers. 
On behalf of authors, Please see inline [skraza]:
    
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    DISCUSS:
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    Thank you for using the YANG Security Considerations template.  Could you
    please provide more details on which nodes are sensitive to write and read
    issues; and the RPC operations of concern.  For example, see
    draft-ietf-isis-yang-isis-cfg or draft-ietf-ospf-yang.

[skraza]: Done. Please see significantly enhanced section in the posted rev -08. 
    
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    COMMENT:
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    A few trivial editorial nits:
[skraza]: Have fixed all those.

    
    * Section 1.1. Typo.  s/minumum/minimum/
    * Section 1.1.  Typo. s/catogories/categories/
    * Section 1.1.  Typo. s/higlighting/highlighting/
    * Section 3.0.  Typo. s/grapically/graphically/
    * Section 5.2.1.  Typo. s/an network-instance/a network-instance/
    
    
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