[mpls] MPLS-RT review of draft-bryant-mpls-sfl-framework

Huub van Helvoort <huubatwork@gmail.com> Fri, 05 May 2017 11:18 UTC

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Subject: [mpls] MPLS-RT review of draft-bryant-mpls-sfl-framework
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Hello authors and WG,

I am an MPLS-RT reviewer assigned to review draft-bryant-mpls-sfl-framework.

The document is short and coherent, it may be useful.

The only comment I have is regarding the text in the first paragraph
of section 4.
I had to read it several times before I understood what it means.
this can be fixed prior to adaption as WG document.

Best regards, Huub.


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