[mpls] Roman Danyliw's Discuss on draft-ietf-mpls-base-yang-15: (with DISCUSS and COMMENT)

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DISCUSS:
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** Section 11.  Thanks for enumerating the sensitive read operations.  It looks
like the sensitive writes aren’t described.  Wouldn’t it be a problem for
arbitrary writes to occur to /rt:routing/mpls/*?  I recommend using the
"template language" of "There are a number of data nodes defined in these YANG
modules that are writable/creatable/deletable ... These are the subtrees and
data nodes and their sensitivity/vulnerability:" to provide this easy fix.


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COMMENT:
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Thanks for the clear introduction of how this models was designed (Section 2.2
and 2.3) and builds on prior work.

Editorial nits:
-- Section 1.  Editorial.  There is a tool chain artifact which is leaving
“{!RFC8349}” in the text.

-- Section 2.3.  Typo. s/Adjecency/Adjacency/

-- Section 2.5. Typo. s/aaugmentation/augmentation/