[mpls] Review of draft-rosen-mpls-rfc3107bis

Mach Chen <mach.chen@huawei.com> Wed, 03 August 2016 08:51 UTC

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From: Mach Chen <mach.chen@huawei.com>
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Hi all,

I have done my MPLS-RT review of draft-rosen-mpls-rfc307bis-00. 

The draft is coherent and useful, it's ready for WG adoption.

The draft is well written and I have only one comment regarding to Section 5. IMHO, although it's informational, the description about the relationship between SAFI-1 and SAFI-4 routes should not belong to this document, it's a more common description that is not specific to this label binding process. I'd suggest to remove this section if there is no any other reasons.


Best regards,
Mach