[mpls] Comments on draft-andersson-mpls-mna-fwk-01

"Dongjie (Jimmy)" <jie.dong@huawei.com> Wed, 25 May 2022 14:34 UTC

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Subject: [mpls] Comments on draft-andersson-mpls-mna-fwk-01
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Dear authors, 

Thanks for the effort in organizing and updating this document. I've reviewed the current version and have a number of comments and suggestions. 

In my view, the most important thing for this framework document is to describe the possible changes introduced to the MPLS architecture, the MPLS data plane encoding, and the processing behaviors of the LSRs. 

Please find the attached file for the details of my review notes. 

Hope it helps and looking forward to your feedback. 

Best regards,