Re: [mpls] New Version Notification for draft-andersson-mpls-mna-fwk-02.txt

Tony Li <tony.li@tony.li> Tue, 31 May 2022 19:03 UTC

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Subject: Re: [mpls] New Version Notification for draft-andersson-mpls-mna-fwk-02.txt
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Hi Haoyu,


> 3.1 <https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-andersson-mpls-mna-fwk-02.html#section-3.1>.  The MNA Label
>  
>    The first LSE in a network action sub-stack contains a special label
>    that indicates a network action sub-stack.  A solution has several
>    choices for this special label.
>  
>  
> I’m confused by the above text. I assume the network action sub-stack is for the ISD encoding.


No.  The network action sub-stack is for all solutions.  

In your solution, you have an Extension Header Label.  That is the entirety of the network action sub-stack in your solution.  You have then placed NAI and AD in PSD.


> I think the text should be updated in the new revision to reflect the concept more neutrally and clearly.


I cannot write text that is so clear that no one can misread into it what is not present in the text.  I can only write clear, unambiguous text. 

Tony