[mpls] RtgDir review: draft-ietf-mpls-tp-aps-updates-02.txt

"Russ White" <russ@riw.us> Mon, 23 January 2017 21:34 UTC

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Y'all--

I have been selected as the Routing Directorate reviewer for this draft. The Routing Directorate seeks to review all routing or routing-related drafts as they pass through IETF last call and IESG review, and sometimes on special request. The purpose of the review is to provide assistance to the Routing ADs. For more information about the Routing Directorate, please see ​http://trac.tools.ietf.org/area/rtg/trac/wiki/RtgDir. Although these comments are primarily for the use of the Routing ADs, it would be helpful if you could consider them along with any other IETF Last Call comments that you receive, and strive to resolve them through discussion or by updating the draft.

Document: draft-ietf-mpls-tp-aps-updates-02.txt 
Reviewer: Russ White
Review Date: 23 January 2017
IETF LC End Date: ??
Intended Status: Standards Track

Summary: No issues found. This document is ready for publication.

The quality and readability of this document is excellent; the draft explains what it needs to explain clearly and in precise terms (given the reader has read the correct background documents).

Major Issues: No major issues found.

Minor Issues: No minor issues found.

Sincerely --
Russ