[mpls] Barry Leiba's No Objection on draft-ietf-mpls-ri-rsvp-frr-07: (with COMMENT)
Barry Leiba via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Thu, 05 December 2019 03:37 UTC
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Subject: [mpls] Barry Leiba's No Objection on draft-ietf-mpls-ri-rsvp-frr-07: (with COMMENT)
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Barry Leiba has entered the following ballot position for draft-ietf-mpls-ri-rsvp-frr-07: No Objection When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this introductory paragraph, however.) Please refer to https://www.ietf.org/iesg/statement/discuss-criteria.html for more information about IESG DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-mpls-ri-rsvp-frr/ ---------------------------------------------------------------------- COMMENT: ---------------------------------------------------------------------- There are numerous problems with the use and absence of articles (“the”, “a”, “an”) throughout the document: articles are missing when they should be there, “the” is used when an indefinite article should be, and so on. That made it a harder read than it should have been. The RPC will fix it during editing, but maybe the AD should add an RFC Editor Note to alert them to be particularly watchful for these issues.
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