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Re: [mpls] Erik Kline's No Objection on draft-ietf-mpls-base-yang-15: (with COMMENT)

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From: Tarek Saad <tsaad@juniper.net>
To: Erik Kline <ek.ietf@gmail.com>, The IESG <iesg@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [mpls] Erik Kline's No Objection on draft-ietf-mpls-base-yang-15: (with COMMENT)
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Hi Erik,

Thanks for your thorough review and comments. We have posted rev -16 (https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-mpls-base-yang-16)  of the document and have addressed all your comments.
Please see inline for responses… [TS]

Regards,
Tarek 

On 9/9/20, 2:43 AM, "Erik Kline via Datatracker" <noreply@ietf.org> wrote:

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    Erik Kline has entered the following ballot position for
    draft-ietf-mpls-base-yang-15: No Objection

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    COMMENT:
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    [[ nits ]]

    [ section 2.2 ]

    * "represents support possible" -> "represents support for possible"?

    [ section 2.3 ]

    * s/Adjecency/Adjacency/

    [ section 2.5 ]

    * "Next-hop acts as primary traffic carrying."

      May read as slightly awkward.  Consider perhaps:

      "Next-hop acts as primary for carrying traffic."

      ...or something.

    * "aaugmentation" -> "augmentation"

[TS]: addressed. All above, thanks.

Regards,
Tarek




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