[mpls] Re: Comments on draft-mirsky-mpls-stamp-07

Greg Mirsky <gregimirsky@gmail.com> Tue, 27 August 2024 22:09 UTC

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Hi Li,
Thank you for your thoroughness and interest in this work; it is much
appreciated. I've addressed that occurrence and uploaded the new version. I
welcome you as a co-author and look forward to constructive cooperation.

Regards,
Greg

On Wed, Aug 21, 2024 at 7:11 PM zhangli (CE) <zhangli344@huawei.com> wrote:

> Hi Greg,
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> Thanks for your quick response and update, please find my response below
> tagged with Li>>.
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> Best regards
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> Li
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> *发件人:* Greg Mirsky <gregimirsky@gmail.com>
> *发送时间:* 2024年8月22日 6:01
> *收件人:* zhangli (CE) <zhangli344@huawei.com>
> *抄送:* mpls@ietf.org
> *主题:* Re: Comments on draft-mirsky-mpls-stamp-07
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> Hi Li,
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> thank you for your interest in the draft and thoughtful comments; much
> appreciated. Please find my notes below tagged GIM>>. Attached are the
> working version and diff that highlights updates.
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> Regards,
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> Greg
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> On Wed, Aug 21, 2024 at 1:54 AM zhangli (CE) <zhangli344@huawei.com>
> wrote:
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> Hi Greg,
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> I am interested in this draft and I just read it, here are my comments.
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> 1.    In the second paragraph of introduction, it writes the “This
> document defines the Reflected Packet Path TLV”. However, this document
> defines “STAMP Session Identifier TLV” in section 3.1, so I suppose the “Reflected
> Packet Path TLV” should be replaced with “STAMP Session Identifier TLV”,
> is it right?
>
> GIM>> Great catch, thank you! You are absolutely correct, it must be
> changed to STAMP Session Identifier TLV. Please check in the working
> version.
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> Li >> Good work, I checked the document in the attachment, there is
> another “STAMP Session Identifier TLV” also need to be replaced, it is in
> the seventh paragraph below Figure1 “If the STAMP Session-Reflector cannot
> find the path specified in the Reflected Packet Path TLV…”
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> 2.    In section 3.1, the draft writes that “Reflected Packet Path field
> contains none, one or more sub-TLVs.”, if I understand correctly, each
> sub-TLV describes a route path(such as Non-FEC Path TLV). If there is only
> one reflected path specified, the Session-Reflector will reflect the test
> packet along the specific path. If there are multiple reflected path, how
> should the Session-Reflector do? Reflect the reflected-test packet on all
> the paths?
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> GIM>> A very good question, thank you. I think that in some environments,
> e.g., SR-MPLS, a sub-TLV that defined for TLV Types 1, 16, and 21
> represents a segment, not the entire path. However, as you've noted,
> Non-FEC Path TLV can be used as alternative to using multiple sub-TLVs.
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> Li>> Great, I think I am clear on this point now. The “Reflected Packet
> Path field” is used to describe one reflected path, if the sub-TLV
> represents a segment, then this “field” could contains one or more
> sub-TLVs, if the sub-TLV represents a path(Non-FEC Path TLV), then this
> “field” Should just contain one sub-TLV. Do I understand correctly?
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> Best regards
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> Li
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> From: <internet-drafts@ietf.org> <&lt;internet-drafts@ietf.org&gt;>
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> Date: Mon, Mar 25, 2024 at 5:52 PM
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> Subject: New Version Notification for draft-mirsky-mpls-stamp-07.txt
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> To: Greg Mirsky <gregimirsky@gmail.com> <&lt;gregimirsky@gmail.com&gt;>
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> A new version of Internet-Draft draft-mirsky-mpls-stamp-07.txt has been
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> successfully submitted by Greg Mirsky and posted to the
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> IETF repository.
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> Name:     draft-mirsky-mpls-stamp
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> Revision: 07
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> Title:    Simple Two-way Active Measurement Protocol (STAMP) for MPLS Label
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> Switched Paths (LSPs)
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> Date:     2024-03-25
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> Group:    Individual Submission
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> Pages:    9
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> URL:      https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-mirsky-mpls-stamp-07.txt
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> Status:   https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-mirsky-mpls-stamp/
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> HTML:     https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-mirsky-mpls-stamp-07.html
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> HTMLized: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-mirsky-mpls-stamp
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> Diff:
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> https://author-tools.ietf.org/iddiff?url2=draft-mirsky-mpls-stamp-07
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> Abstract:
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>    Simple Two-way Active Measurement Protocol (STAMP), defined in RFC
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>    8762 and RFC 8972, is expected to be able to monitor the performance
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>    of paths between systems that use a wide variety of encapsulations.
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>    This document defines encapsulation and bootstrapping of a STAMP test
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>    session over an MPLS Label Switched Path.
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> The IETF Secretariat
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