Re: [mpls] Last Call: <draft-ietf-mpls-tp-shared-ring-protection-05.txt> (Shared-Ring protection (MSRP) mechanism for ring topology) to Proposed Standard

Huub van Helvoort <huubatwork@gmail.com> Fri, 12 May 2017 08:49 UTC

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Subject: Re: [mpls] Last Call: <draft-ietf-mpls-tp-shared-ring-protection-05.txt> (Shared-Ring protection (MSRP) mechanism for ring topology) to Proposed Standard
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Hello Taesik,

Thank you very much for reviewing the draft in detail
and for your valid comments.

We, the authors of the draft, will incorporate your comments.

Best regards, Huub.


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> Dear authors,
>
> I have two comments on this draft.
>
> 1) Section 4.4.1 (last two paragraphs above Figure 11)
>
> Following two sentences are duplicated in the last two paragraphs above Figure 11.
>
> Figure 11 shows the topology of single-node interconnected
> rings. Node C is the interconnection node between Ring1 and
> Ring2.
>
> Proposed change: delete the last paragraph.
>
>
> 2) Section 5.1.4.2 (3rd paragraph from the bottom)
>
> The last two bullet items correspond to conditions which trigger state transition from the Switching state to the Idle state. However, current text above those bullet items is describing adversely.
>
> Proposed change:
>
> OLD TEXT
> In one of the following conditions, transition from the Idle state to
> the Switching state MUST be triggered:
>
> NEW TEXT
> In one of the following conditions, transition from the Switching state to
> the Idle state MUST be triggered:
>
> Best regards,
> Taesik
>
>
> -----Original Message-----
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> Subject: [mpls] Last Call: <draft-ietf-mpls-tp-shared-ring-protection-05.txt> (Shared-Ring protection (MSRP) mechanism for ring topology) to Proposed Standard
>
>
> The IESG has received a request from the Multiprotocol Label Switching WG
> (mpls) to consider the following document:
> - 'Shared-Ring protection (MSRP) mechanism for ring topology'
>    <draft-ietf-mpls-tp-shared-ring-protection-05.txt> as Proposed Standard
>
> The IESG plans to make a decision in the next few weeks, and solicits final comments on this action. Please send substantive comments to the ietf@ietf.org mailing lists by 2017-05-12. Exceptionally, comments may be sent to iesg@ietf.org instead. In either case, please retain the beginning of the Subject line to allow automated sorting.
>
> Abstract
>
>
>     This document describes requirements, architecture and solutions for
>     MPLS-TP Shared Ring Protection (MSRP) in a ring topology for point-
>     to-point (P2P) services.  The MSRP mechanism is described to meet the
>     ring protection requirements as described in RFC 5654.  This document
>     defines the Ring Protection Switch (RPS) Protocol that is used to
>     coordinate the protection behavior of the nodes on MPLS ring.
>
>
>
>
>
> The file can be obtained via
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-mpls-tp-shared-ring-protection/
>
> IESG discussion can be tracked via
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-mpls-tp-shared-ring-protection/ballot/
>
> The following IPR Declarations may be related to this I-D:
>
>     https://datatracker.ietf.org/ipr/2680/
>     https://datatracker.ietf.org/ipr/2681/
>     https://datatracker.ietf.org/ipr/2682/
>     https://datatracker.ietf.org/ipr/2683/
>
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