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Re: [mpls] working group adoption poll on draft-bocci-mpls-miad-adi-requirements

Greg Mirsky <gregimirsky@gmail.com> Wed, 13 April 2022 14:03 UTC

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Date: Wed, 13 Apr 2022 07:03:04 -0700
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Subject: Re: [mpls] working group adoption poll on draft-bocci-mpls-miad-adi-requirements
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Dear All,
I support the adoption of this draft by the MPLS WG.
Below, please find my non-blocking notes (clearly editorial):

   - Use of the normative language, Terminology section in particular. For
   example, in "There may be associated ancillary data in the packet."
   - Network Action Sub-Stack is abbreviated as NAS. I think that
   abbreviating as NASS or presenting the extended term as Network Action
   Sub-stack improves correlation between the full form and acronym. Also,
   I've noticed that NAS is not used throughout the document. It might not be
   useful after all.
   - Perhaps a typo in the first requirement Section 3.2 s/and/an/
   - It is not clear what "NAI is delivered to a node" might mean in the
   requirement 5 of Section 3.2. Perhaps the next requirement is sufficient
   and #5 can be removed from the document. Also, #5 seems like it has some
   extra wording. Perhaps s/in the way in a way/in a way/?

Regards,
Greg

On Wed, Apr 13, 2022 at 2:29 AM Loa Andersson <loa@pi.nu> wrote:

> Working Group,
>
> This is to start a two week poll on adopting
> poll on draft-bocci-mpls-miad-adi-requirements
> as a MPLS working group document.
>
> THough we normally do two weeks pretty stric, in this case I have
> allowed a couple of extra days due to holliday season.
>
> Please send your comments (support/not support) to the mpls working
> group mailing list (mpls@ietf.org). Please give a technical
> motivation for your support/not support, especially if you think that
> the document should not be adopted as a working group document.
>
> There is no IPRs disclosure against this document.
>
> The both authors have stated on the MPLS wg mailing list that they are
> unaware of any IPRs that relates to this document.
>
> The working group adoption poll ends May 2, 2022.
>
> /Loa
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