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Re: [mpls] Mirja Kühlewind's No Objection on draft-ietf-mpls-app-aware-tldp-08: (with COMMENT)

Santosh Esale <sesale@juniper.net> Thu, 22 June 2017 23:06 UTC

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From: Santosh Esale <sesale@juniper.net>
To: Mirja Kühlewind <ietf@kuehlewind.net>, The IESG <iesg@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [mpls] Mirja Kühlewind's No Objection on draft-ietf-mpls-app-aware-tldp-08: (with COMMENT)
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Thanks Mirja ! We have addressed both the comments.
The new version - 09 will be published by 6/25.

Santosh (On behalf of Authors)

On 6/18/17, 2:13 AM, "mpls on behalf of Mirja Kühlewind"
<mpls-bounces@ietf.org on behalf of ietf@kuehlewind.net> wrote:

>Mirja Kühlewind has entered the following ballot position for
>draft-ietf-mpls-app-aware-tldp-08: No Objection
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>COMMENT:
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>nits regarding use of normative language:
>
>1) sec 2.2.: „Therefore, if
>   the intersection of the sets of received and sent TA-Id is null, then
>   LSR MUST send 'Session Rejected/Targeted Application Capability Mis-
>   Match' Notification message to the initiating LSR and close the
>   session.“
>Probably no need to make this normative MUST again in the example text
>-> s/MUST send/sends/
>
>2) Similar the use of normative language in the use case section (5) does
>not
>seem to be appropriate, or at least not consistent. Maybe just convert all
>upper cases MAYs to lower case in that section.
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