Re: [mpls] Updated rev -08 posted [Re: Roman Danyliw's Discuss on draft-ietf-mpls-ldp-yang-07: (with DISCUSS and COMMENT)]

Roman Danyliw <rdd@cert.org> Fri, 28 February 2020 14:16 UTC

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From: Roman Danyliw <rdd@cert.org>
To: "Kamran Raza (skraza)" <skraza@cisco.com>, The IESG <iesg@ietf.org>
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Thread-Topic: Updated rev -08 posted [Re: [mpls] Roman Danyliw's Discuss on draft-ietf-mpls-ldp-yang-07: (with DISCUSS and COMMENT)]
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Subject: Re: [mpls] Updated rev -08 posted [Re: Roman Danyliw's Discuss on draft-ietf-mpls-ldp-yang-07: (with DISCUSS and COMMENT)]
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Hi Kamran!

The changes in -08 address my concerns.  Thank you for making this update.

Regards,
Roman

> -----Original Message-----
> From: Kamran Raza (skraza) <skraza@cisco.com>
> Sent: Thursday, February 27, 2020 11:29 PM
> To: Roman Danyliw <rdd@cert.org>rg>; The IESG <iesg@ietf.org>
> Cc: mpls@ietf.org; mpls-chairs@ietf.org; draft-ietf-mpls-ldp-yang@ietf.org
> Subject: Updated rev -08 posted [Re: [mpls] Roman Danyliw's Discuss on
> draft-ietf-mpls-ldp-yang-07: (with DISCUSS and COMMENT)]
> 
> Thanks for your review Roman.
> We have posted a new rev -08 that takes care your comments and
> comments from other IESG reviewers.
> On behalf of authors, Please see inline [skraza]:
> 
>     ----------------------------------------------------------------------
>     DISCUSS:
>     ----------------------------------------------------------------------
> 
>     Thank you for using the YANG Security Considerations template.  Could you
>     please provide more details on which nodes are sensitive to write and read
>     issues; and the RPC operations of concern.  For example, see
>     draft-ietf-isis-yang-isis-cfg or draft-ietf-ospf-yang.
> 
> [skraza]: Done. Please see significantly enhanced section in the posted rev -
> 08.
> 
>     ----------------------------------------------------------------------
>     COMMENT:
>     ----------------------------------------------------------------------
> 
>     A few trivial editorial nits:
> [skraza]: Have fixed all those.
> 
> 
>     * Section 1.1. Typo.  s/minumum/minimum/
>     * Section 1.1.  Typo. s/catogories/categories/
>     * Section 1.1.  Typo. s/higlighting/highlighting/
>     * Section 3.0.  Typo. s/grapically/graphically/
>     * Section 5.2.1.  Typo. s/an network-instance/a network-instance/
> 
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