Re: [mpls] MPLS wglc draft-ietf-mpls-base-yang

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From: "Acee Lindem (acee)" <acee@cisco.com>
To: Loa Andersson <loa@pi.nu>, "mpls@ietf.org" <mpls@ietf.org>
CC: "mpls-chairs@ietf.org" <mpls-chairs@ietf.org>, "draft-ietf-mpls-base-yang@ietf.org" <draft-ietf-mpls-base-yang@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [mpls] MPLS wglc draft-ietf-mpls-base-yang
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Hi Loa, 

I have rereviewed the draft and support publication. As a co-author of RFC 8349, I feel the augments are correct and straightforward. I have a couple nit-level comments.

   1. Since "loadshare" is not a well know compound word, I'd recommend replacing with "load-share". 
   2. Replace all instance of  "e.g. " with "e.g., ". 

Thanks,
Acee

On 12/19/19, 3:22 AM, "mpls on behalf of Loa Andersson" <mpls-bounces@ietf.org on behalf of loa@pi.nu> wrote:

    Working Group,
    
    This is to initiate a "two week" working group last call on
    draft-ietf-mpls-base-yang.
    
    Mote: We are allowing for the holiday season and intend to close the
    wglc on Friday January 10, 2020.
    
    Please send your comments to the mpls wg mailing list (mpls@ietf.org).
    
    There are no IPR disclosures against draft-ietf-mpls-rmr.
    
    Both the authors and the contributors have stated on the working group
    mailing list that they are unaware of any non-disclosed IPRs that
    relates to this document.
    
    This working group last call ends Friday January 10, 2020.
    
    /Loa
    mpls wg co-chair
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