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Re: [mpls] Barry Leiba's No Objection on draft-ietf-mpls-ri-rsvp-frr-07: (with COMMENT)

Chandrasekar Ramachandran <csekar@juniper.net> Thu, 05 December 2019 05:39 UTC

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From: Chandrasekar Ramachandran <csekar@juniper.net>
To: Barry Leiba <barryleiba@computer.org>, The IESG <iesg@ietf.org>
CC: "draft-ietf-mpls-ri-rsvp-frr@ietf.org" <draft-ietf-mpls-ri-rsvp-frr@ietf.org>, Nicolai Leymann <n.leymann@telekom.de>, "mpls-chairs@ietf.org" <mpls-chairs@ietf.org>, "mpls@ietf.org" <mpls@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [mpls] Barry Leiba's No Objection on draft-ietf-mpls-ri-rsvp-frr-07: (with COMMENT)
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Hi Barry,
The comments from the genart review were on similar lines and hence this will be addressed in the next revision of the document.

Thanks,
Chandra.


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> -----Original Message-----
> From: Barry Leiba via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org>
> Sent: Thursday, December 5, 2019 9:07 AM
> To: The IESG <iesg@ietf.org>
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> Subject: Barry Leiba's No Objection on draft-ietf-mpls-ri-rsvp-frr-07: (with
> COMMENT)
> 
> Barry Leiba has entered the following ballot position for
> draft-ietf-mpls-ri-rsvp-frr-07: No Objection
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> COMMENT:
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> 
> There are numerous problems with the use and absence of articles (“the”,
> “a”,
> “an”) throughout the document: articles are missing when they should be
> there,
> “the” is used when an indefinite article should be, and so on.  That made it a
> harder read than it should have been.  The RPC will fix it during editing, but
> maybe the AD should add an RFC Editor Note to alert them to be particularly
> watchful for these issues.
>

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