Re: [MSEC] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC6407 (3861)

[Sean Turner <[e-mail]>]

I guess I’d rather just mark this one hold for document update because I don’t think implementers are going to make any implementation mistakes based on the errata or the suggestion below.  Are we okay with that?

spt

On Jan 07, 2014, at 10:24, William Atwood <[e-mail]> wrote:

> It took me using "diff" to find what is reported as an error.
> 
> s/ISAMKP/ISAKMP/ in line 5.
> 
> Yes, this is an error.
> 
> However, my suggestion is to re-word the paragraph as follows:
> 
> Secure group and multicast applications require a method by which each
> group member shares common security policy and keying material.
> This document describes a group key management system called the Group
> Domain of Interpretation (GDOI), which is an Internet Security
> Association and Key Management Protocol (ISAKMP) [RFC2408] Domain of
> Interpretation (DOI).
> 
>  Bill
> 
> On 07/01/2014 5:02 AM, RFC Errata System wrote:
>> The following errata report has been submitted for RFC6407,
>> "The Group Domain of Interpretation".
>> 
>> --------------------------------------
>> You may review the report below and at:
>> http://www.rfc-editor.org/errata_search.php?rfc=6407&eid=3861
>> 
>> --------------------------------------
>> Type: Editorial
>> Reported by: Prashant Gupta <[e-mail]>
>> 
>> Section: Introduction
>> 
>> Original Text
>> -------------
>> Secure group and multicast applications require a method by which
>>   each group member shares common security policy and keying material.
>>   This document describes the Group Domain of Interpretation (GDOI),
>>   which is an Internet Security Association and Key Management Protocol
>>   (ISAMKP) [RFC2408] Domain of Interpretation (DOI), a group key
>>   management system. 
>> 
>> Corrected Text
>> --------------
>> Secure group and multicast applications require a method by which
>>   each group member shares common security policy and keying material.
>>   This document describes the Group Domain of Interpretation (GDOI),
>>   which is an Internet Security Association and Key Management Protocol
>>   (ISAKMP) [RFC2408] Domain of Interpretation (DOI), a group key
>>   management system. 
>> 
>> Notes
>> -----
>> 
>> 
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>> 
>> --------------------------------------
>> RFC6407 (draft-ietf-msec-gdoi-update-11)
>> --------------------------------------
>> Title               : The Group Domain of Interpretation
>> Publication Date    : October 2011
>> Author(s)           : B. Weis, S. Rowles, T. Hardjono
>> Category            : PROPOSED STANDARD
>> Source              : Multicast Security
>> Area                : Security
>> Stream              : IETF
>> Verifying Party     : IESG
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