Re: [Mtgvenue] Adam Roach's Yes on draft-ietf-mtgvenue-iaoc-venue-selection-process-15: (with COMMENT)

Adam Roach <adam@nostrum.com> Wed, 06 June 2018 22:36 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Mtgvenue] Adam Roach's Yes on draft-ietf-mtgvenue-iaoc-venue-selection-process-15: (with COMMENT)
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Pete, Eliot --

Thanks for your quick responses. Although I continue to beleive that 
there are cleaner ways to thread this needle, the current approach isn't 
actually problematic, and it sounds like it has already had significant 
consideration. I appreciate the time you have each taken to explain the 
history of this text.

/a

On 6/6/18 4:10 PM, Pete Resnick wrote:
> Hi Adam,
>
> See my reply to Spencer regarding IASA 2.0 for some more details. As 
> Eliot said, the current edit was an attempt to take that into account, 
> which we worked out with our AD. Perhaps something to discuss on the 
> telechat.
>
> I'll be sure we cover the two editorial bits. Thanks for those.
>
> pr
>
> On 5 Jun 2018, at 23:06, Adam Roach wrote:
>
>> Adam Roach has entered the following ballot position for
>> draft-ietf-mtgvenue-iaoc-venue-selection-process-15: Yes
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>> ----------------------------------------------------------------------
>> COMMENT:
>> ----------------------------------------------------------------------
>>
>> Thanks to everyone who worked on this document.
>>
>> I agree with Spencer's concern that this document is tightly tied to 
>> the current
>> IASA structure, which is under revision at the moment. I think it 
>> would be an
>> improvement to describe, in more general terms, the entity 
>> responsible for
>> selecting venues, with a single note early in the document that the 
>> entity
>> currently in that role is the IASA.
>>
>> I also have a handful of editorial nits that the authors may wish to 
>> address.
>>
>> --------------------------------------------------------------------------- 
>>
>>
>> Please expand "IASA" in the Abstract, assuming it remains in the 
>> Abstract.
>>
>> --------------------------------------------------------------------------- 
>>
>>
>> Abstract:
>>
>>>  It directs the IASA to make available additional process
>>>  documents around that describe the current meeting selection process.
>>
>> I'm having a really hard time parsing this sentence. It seems to make 
>> sense if
>> you remove "around".
>>
>> --------------------------------------------------------------------------- 
>>
>>
>> §2.1:
>>
>>>     criteria below, one mandatory and others important, to allow for
>>>     the case where local laws may require filtering in some
>>>     circumstances.[MeetingNet]
>>
>> It's not clear what "[MeetingNet]" is doing here. Perhaps some 
>> explanatory text
>> about what the reader can expect to find at that reference would be 
>> useful.
>>
>> In any case, consider putting a space before the opening bracket.
>