Re: [netconf] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC8650 (6379)

"Eric Voit (evoit)" <evoit@cisco.com> Mon, 04 January 2021 15:02 UTC

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From: "Eric Voit (evoit)" <evoit@cisco.com>
To: RFC Errata System <rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org>, "Einar Nilsen-Nygaard (einarnn)" <einarnn@cisco.com>, "ludwig@clemm.org" <ludwig@clemm.org>, "andy@yumaworks.com" <andy@yumaworks.com>, "warren@kumari.net" <warren@kumari.net>, "Rob Wilton (rwilton)" <rwilton@cisco.com>, "kent+ietf@watsen.net" <kent+ietf@watsen.net>, "mjethanandani@gmail.com" <mjethanandani@gmail.com>, Reshad Rahman <reshad@yahoo.com>
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Subject: Re: [netconf] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC8650 (6379)
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Adding Reshad's new email.   I think this should be accepted.

Eric

> The following errata report has been submitted for RFC8650, "Dynamic
> Subscription to YANG Events and Datastores over RESTCONF".
>
> --------------------------------------
> You may review the report below and at:
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/errata/eid6379
>
> --------------------------------------
> Type: Editorial
> Reported by: Muly Ilan <muly_i@rad.com>
>
> Section: A.1.1
>
> Original Text
> -------------
>    Upon receipt of the successful response, the subscriber does a GET to
>    the provided URI to start the flow of notification messages.  When
>    the publisher receives this, the subscription is moved to the active
>    state (c).
>
>    GET /restconf/subscriptions/22
>
>              Figure 5: "establish-subscription" Subsequent POST
>
> Corrected Text
> --------------
>    Upon receipt of the successful response, the subscriber does a GET to
>    the provided URI to start the flow of notification messages.  When
>    the publisher receives this, the subscription is moved to the active
>    state (c).
>
>    GET /restconf/subscriptions/22
>
>              Figure 5: "establish-subscription" Subsequent GET
>
> Notes
> -----
> Substitute POST by GET in the figure caption
>
> Instructions:
> -------------
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>
> --------------------------------------
> RFC8650 (draft-ietf-netconf-restconf-notif-15)
> --------------------------------------
> Title               : Dynamic Subscription to YANG Events and Datastores 
> over
> RESTCONF
> Publication Date    : November 2019
> Author(s)           : E. Voit, R. Rahman, E. Nilsen-Nygaard, A. Clemm, A. 
> Bierman
> Category            : PROPOSED STANDARD
> Source              : Network Configuration
> Area                : Operations and Management
> Stream              : IETF
> Verifying Party     : IESG