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Re: [netconf] [Errata Verified] RFC8572 (6616)

"Rob Wilton (rwilton)" <rwilton@cisco.com> Tue, 22 June 2021 11:08 UTC

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From: "Rob Wilton (rwilton)" <rwilton@cisco.com>
To: Chris Smiley <csmiley@amsl.com>
CC: "sramanathan@google.com" <sramanathan@google.com>, RFC Errata System <rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org>, Kent Watsen <kent+ietf@watsen.net>, "ian.farrer@telekom.de" <ian.farrer@telekom.de>, "mikael.abrahamsson@t-systems.se" <mikael.abrahamsson@t-systems.se>, IESG <iesg@ietf.org>, "netconf@ietf.org" <netconf@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [netconf] [Errata Verified] RFC8572 (6616)
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Hi Chris,

Yes, thanks.  I hadn't intended to change this ...

Regards,
Rob


> -----Original Message-----
> From: Chris Smiley <csmiley@amsl.com>
> Sent: 21 June 2021 21:22
> To: Rob Wilton (rwilton) <rwilton@cisco.com>
> Cc: sramanathan@google.com; RFC Errata System <rfc-editor@rfc-
> editor.org>; Kent Watsen <kent+ietf@watsen.net>; ian.farrer@telekom.de;
> mikael.abrahamsson@t-systems.se; IESG <iesg@ietf.org>; netconf@ietf.org
> Subject: Re: [Errata Verified] RFC8572 (6616)
> 
> 
> Hi Rob,
> 
> The section has been updated from 4.2 to 4.2.3. to match the original errata
> report and RFC 8572.
> Please let me know if you have any objections.
> 
> Thank you,
> RFC Editor/cs
> 
> 
> > On Jun 21, 2021, at 5:21 AM, RFC Errata System <rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org>
> wrote:
> >
> > The following errata report has been verified for RFC8572,
> > "Secure Zero Touch Provisioning (SZTP)".
> >
> > --------------------------------------
> > You may review the report below and at:
> > https://www.rfc-editor.org/errata/eid6616
> >
> > --------------------------------------
> > Status: Verified
> > Type: Editorial
> >
> > Reported by: Srihari Ramanathan <sramanathan@google.com>
> > Date Reported: 2021-06-18
> > Verified by: Rob Wilton (IESG)
> >
> > Section: 4.2.
> >
> > Original Text
> > -------------
> >   For device-independent queries, the three bootstrapping artifacts
> >   defined in Section 3 are encoded into the SVR records as follows.
> >
> >   Artifact to SRV Record Mapping:
> >
> >      Conveyed Information:  This artifact is not supported directly.
> >         Instead, the essence of unsigned redirect information is mapped
> >         to SVR records per [RFC2782].
> >
> > Corrected Text
> > --------------
> >   For device-independent queries, the three bootstrapping artifacts
> >   defined in Section 3 are encoded into the SRV records as follows.
> >
> >   Artifact to SRV Record Mapping:
> >
> >      Conveyed Information:  This artifact is not supported directly.
> >         Instead, the essence of unsigned redirect information is mapped
> >         to SRV records per [RFC2782].
> >
> > Notes
> > -----
> > In both places "SVR" should obviously read "SRV".
> >
> >
> > --------------------------------------
> > RFC8572 (draft-ietf-netconf-zerotouch-29)
> > --------------------------------------
> > Title               : Secure Zero Touch Provisioning (SZTP)
> > Publication Date    : April 2019
> > Author(s)           : K. Watsen, I. Farrer, M. Abrahamsson
> > Category            : PROPOSED STANDARD
> > Source              : Network Configuration
> > Area                : Operations and Management
> > Stream              : IETF
> > Verifying Party     : IESG
> >

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