[netconf] draft-ietf-netconf-privcand private candidate | NETCONF client capability declaration in 4.4.2.1

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Hi



As per James C. (co-author) preference, I am sending all other questions and remarks I have on this draft.



Quoting 4.4.2.1:



"All RPC requests that target the candidate configuration datastore will operate in exactly the same way as they would do when using the shared candidate configuration datastore, however, when the server receives a request to act upon the candidate configuration datastore it instead uses the session's private candidate configuration datastore."



I find this formulation quite difficult to undertand.



Also, quoting 2.2:

"The candidate configuration datastore defined in [RFC6241] is referenced as the shared candidate configuration in this document."



Thus I suggest a different and simpler formulation for 4.4.2.1:

"All RPC requests that target or impact the shared candidate configuration datastore will implicitly target or impact the session's private candidate configuration datastore instead, and operate in exactly the same way."



What do you think?



Best regards,

Dylan Sadoun

Orange Restricted



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