Re: [netconf] Éric Vyncke's No Objection on draft-ietf-netconf-yang-push-22: (with COMMENT)

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From: "Eric Vyncke (evyncke)" <evyncke@cisco.com>
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Please ignore my comment C3, my bad...

-éric

On 29/04/2019, 15:12, "iesg on behalf of Éric Vyncke via Datatracker" <iesg-bounces@ietf.org on behalf of noreply@ietf.org>; wrote:

    Éric Vyncke has entered the following ballot position for
    draft-ietf-netconf-yang-push-22: No Objection
    
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    Getting a streaming telemetry for changes in datastore appears quite useful.
    
    Please note that I did not review in depth after the section 4.
    
    Comments
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    C1) Out of curiosity, it is surprising for a netconf wg document to have 7
    errors indicated by the YANG validator. Are they real errors or is the `pyang`
    validator incorrect or missing references?
    
    C2) 7 authors... the limit is usually 5 authors max. Can you justify?
    
    C3) section 2. It should be RFC 8174 without citing RFC 2119.
    
    C4) section 3.7, why not forcing a resynch (and a patch-id of 0) rather than
    simply rolling explicitly the patch-id to 0. The latter seems to me as prone to
    synchronization errors.
    
    Nits
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    N1) unsure why all Cisco Systems authors are not grouped together
    
    N2) "Xpath": should be described (or having a reference) before first use in
    section 3.6
    
    N3) a couple of "yang" in lowercase while I believe "YANG" is always written in
    uppercase