Re: [netconf] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC8650 (6368)

"Eric Voit (evoit)" <evoit@cisco.com> Thu, 24 December 2020 15:14 UTC

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From: "Eric Voit (evoit)" <evoit@cisco.com>
To: RFC Errata System <rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org>, "Reshad Rahman (rrahman)" <rrahman@cisco.com>, "Einar Nilsen-Nygaard (einarnn)" <einarnn@cisco.com>, "ludwig@clemm.org" <ludwig@clemm.org>, "andy@yumaworks.com" <andy@yumaworks.com>, "warren@kumari.net" <warren@kumari.net>, "Rob Wilton (rwilton)" <rwilton@cisco.com>, "kent+ietf@watsen.net" <kent+ietf@watsen.net>, "mjethanandani@gmail.com" <mjethanandani@gmail.com>
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Subject: Re: [netconf] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC8650 (6368)
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Rather than changing the subscription from 22 to 39, the URI should be made:
https://example.com/restconf/subscriptions/39

Reasons:
(1) There is no assumption that the subscription is the same one as for the 
previous example.
(2) We want to keep the examples in lock-step with RFC8640.

Eric

> -----Original Message-----
> From: RFC Errata System <rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org>
> Sent: Thursday, December 24, 2020 9:56 AM
> To: Eric Voit (evoit) <evoit@cisco.com>om>; Reshad Rahman (rrahman)
> <rrahman@cisco.com>om>; Einar Nilsen-Nygaard (einarnn) <einarnn@cisco.com>om>;
> ludwig@clemm.org; andy@yumaworks.com; warren@kumari.net; Rob Wilton
> (rwilton) <rwilton@cisco.com>om>; kent+ietf@watsen.net;
> mjethanandani@gmail.com
> Cc: muly_i@rad.com; netconf@ietf.org; rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org
> Subject: [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC8650 (6368)
>
> The following errata report has been submitted for RFC8650, "Dynamic
> Subscription to YANG Events and Datastores over RESTCONF".
>
> --------------------------------------
> You may review the report below and at:
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/errata/eid6368
>
> --------------------------------------
> Type: Editorial
> Reported by: Muly Ilan <muly_i@rad.com>
>
> Section: A.2.1
>
> Original Text
> -------------
> A.2.1.  "subscription-modified"
>
>    A "subscription-modified" encoded in JSON would look like:
>
>    {
>      "ietf-restconf:notification" : {
>        "eventTime": "2007-09-01T10:00:00Z",
>        "ietf-subscribed-notifications:subscription-modified": {
>          "id": 39,
>          "uri": "https://example.com/restconf/subscriptions/22"
>          "stream-xpath-filter": "/example-module:foo",
>          "stream": {
>             "ietf-netconf-subscribed-notifications" : "NETCONF"
>          }
>        }
>      }
>    }
>
> Corrected Text
> --------------
> A.2.1.  "subscription-modified"
>
>    A "subscription-modified" encoded in JSON would look like:
>
>    {
>      "ietf-restconf:notification" : {
>        "eventTime": "2007-09-01T10:00:00Z",
>        "ietf-subscribed-notifications:subscription-modified": {
>          "id": 22,
>          "uri": "https://example.com/restconf/subscriptions/22"
>          "stream-xpath-filter": "/example-module:foo",
>          "stream": {
>             "ietf-netconf-subscribed-notifications" : "NETCONF"
>          }
>        }
>      }
>    }
>
> Notes
> -----
> Subscription ID should be 22 instead of 39.
>
> An existing subscription ID cannot be changed. According to the previous
> examples in Appendix A the subscription got the ID 22. Also the example URI
> indicates ID of 22.
>
> Instructions:
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>
> --------------------------------------
> RFC8650 (draft-ietf-netconf-restconf-notif-15)
> --------------------------------------
> Title               : Dynamic Subscription to YANG Events and Datastores 
> over
> RESTCONF
> Publication Date    : November 2019
> Author(s)           : E. Voit, R. Rahman, E. Nilsen-Nygaard, A. Clemm, A. 
> Bierman
> Category            : PROPOSED STANDARD
> Source              : Network Configuration
> Area                : Operations and Management
> Stream              : IETF
> Verifying Party     : IESG