Re: [Netconf] I-D Action: draft-ietf-netconf-zerotouch-26.txt

tom petch <ietfc@btconnect.com> Mon, 31 December 2018 10:22 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Netconf] I-D Action: draft-ietf-netconf-zerotouch-26.txt
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Kent

You have added the reference to RFC8174 to the YANG modules but ...
it appears as [RFC8174] which to my eyes looks like a HTML/XML anchor
which will not work in a plain text YANG module.

Tom Petch

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>
> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
directories.
> This draft is a work item of the Network Configuration WG of the IETF.
>
>         Title           : Zero Touch Provisioning for Networking
Devices
>         Authors         : Kent Watsen
>                           Mikael Abrahamsson
>                           Ian Farrer
> Filename        : draft-ietf-netconf-zerotouch-26.txt
> Pages           : 95
> Date            : 2018-12-20
>
> Abstract:
>    This draft presents a technique to securely provision a networking
>    device when it is booting in a factory-default state.  Variations
in
>    the solution enables it to be used on both public and private
>    networks.  The provisioning steps are able to update the boot
image,
>    commit an initial configuration, and execute arbitrary scripts to
>    address auxiliary needs.  The updated device is subsequently able
to
>    establish secure connections with other systems.  For instance, a
>    device may establish NETCONF (RFC 6241) and/or RESTCONF (RFC 8040)
>    connections with deployment-specific network management systems.
>
>
> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-netconf-zerotouch/
>
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> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-netconf-zerotouch-26
>
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