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Kent Watsen <kwatsen@juniper.net> Wed, 02 January 2019 23:27 UTC

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From: Kent Watsen <kwatsen@juniper.net>
To: tom petch <ietfc@btconnect.com>, "netconf@ietf.org" <netconf@ietf.org>
Thread-Topic: [Netconf] I-D Action: draft-ietf-netconf-zerotouch-26.txt
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Subject: Re: [Netconf] I-D Action: draft-ietf-netconf-zerotouch-26.txt
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Hi Tom,

> You have added the reference to RFC8174 to the YANG modules but ...
> it appears as [RFC8174] which to my eyes looks like a HTML/XML anchor
> which will not work in a plain text YANG module.

Right you are, I had simply copy/pasted the text from the plain-text
version of a draft.

Below is the my proposed diff to the YANG modules - any concerns?

     The key words 'MUST', 'MUST NOT', 'REQUIRED', 'SHALL',
     'SHALL NOT', 'SHOULD', 'SHOULD NOT', 'RECOMMENDED', 
     'NOT RECOMMENDED', 'MAY', and 'OPTIONAL' in this document
-    are to be interpreted as described in BCP 14 [RFC2119]
-    [RFC8174] when, and only when, they appear in all
+    are to be interpreted as described in BCP 14 (RFC 2119,
+    RFC 8174) when, and only when, they appear in all
     capitals, as shown here.


PS: Welcome to 2019 all!

Kent

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