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header-match-netconf.ietf.org-0; nonmember-moderation; administrivia; implicit-dest; max-recipients; max-size; news-moderation; no-subject; digests; suspicious-header X-Mailman-Version: 3.3.9rc4 Precedence: list Subject: =?utf-8?q?=5Bnetconf=5D_Re=3A_draft-ietf-netconf-privcand_private_candidate_?= =?utf-8?q?=7C_=3Ccompare=3E_on_private-candidate=28s=29?= List-Id: NETCONF WG list Archived-At: List-Archive: List-Help: List-Owner: List-Post: List-Subscribe: List-Unsubscribe: --_000_SA1PR08MB7215DEDD8D658AB34C70F9CEFF652SA1PR08MB7215namp_ Content-Type: text/plain; charset="Windows-1252" Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable Hi Dylan, I don=92t think the proposed wording is correct. It implies (at least to m= e) that you could compare between the last update point of the private cand= idate and the initial creation point of the private candidate (and not invo= lve the current point of the private candidate at all). This was not the i= ntention of the original wording. I=92ve added the RFC into the text for the upcoming -05 as you suggest. Thanks James From: dylan.sadoun@orange.com Date: Tuesday, 30 July 2024 at 08:01 To: netconf@ietf.org , draft-ietf-netconf-privcand@ietf.o= rg Subject: draft-ietf-netconf-privcand private candidate | on priva= te-candidate(s) Hello Quoting 4.5: "A operation MAY be performed against: 1. The initial creation point of the private candidate's branch 2. Against the last update point of the private candidate's branch 3. Against the running configuration" This phrasing seems a bit obscure to me... If these are 3 different points = of comparison, wouldn't it be simpler rephrased as: "A [RFC9144] operation MAY be performed against two of: 1. The initial creation point of the private candidate's branch 2. The last update point of the private candidate's branch 3. The running configuration" NB: I added the reference to RFC9144 as well. Best regards, Dylan Sadoun Orange Restricted --_000_SA1PR08MB7215DEDD8D658AB34C70F9CEFF652SA1PR08MB7215namp_ Content-Type: text/html; charset="Windows-1252" Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable

Hi Dylan,

 

I don=92t think the proposed wording is correct.  It implies (= at least to me) that you could compare between the last update point of the= private candidate and the initial creation point of the private candidate (and not involve the current point of the p= rivate candidate at all).  This was not the intention of the original = wording. 

 

I=92ve added the RFC into the text for the upcoming -05 as you sugg= est.

 

Thanks

 

James

 

 

From: dylan.s= adoun@orange.com <dylan.sadoun@orange.com>
Date: Tuesday, 30 July 2024 at 08:01
To: netconf@ietf.org <netconf@ietf.org>, draft-ietf-netconf-pr= ivcand@ietf.org <draft-ietf-netconf-privcand@ietf.org>
Subject: draft-ietf-netconf-privcand private candidate | <compare= > on private-candidate(s)

Hello=

 

Quoting 4.5:

 

"A <compare> operatio= n MAY be performed against:<= /p>

  1. The initial creation point of the private candidate's branch
  2. Against the last update point of the private candidate's branch
  3. Against the running configuration"

 

This phrasing seems a bit obscure t= o me... If these are 3 different points of comparison, wouldn't it be simpl= er rephrased as:

 

"A <compare&= gt; [RFC9144] operation MAY be performed against two of:

  1. The initial creation point of the private candidate's branch
  2. The last update point of the private candidate's branch
  3. <= o:p>

 

NB: I added the reference to RFC914= 4 as well.

 

Best regards,=

Dylan Sadoun=

Orange Restricted=

 

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