Re: [netconf] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC8572 (6616)

Kent Watsen <kent+ietf@watsen.net> Mon, 21 June 2021 12:06 UTC

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From: Kent Watsen <kent+ietf@watsen.net>
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Subject: Re: [netconf] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC8572 (6616)
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This Errata should be accepted.

Obviously “SVR" should’ve been “SRV”.

K.



> On Jun 18, 2021, at 7:12 PM, RFC Errata System <rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org> wrote:
> 
> The following errata report has been submitted for RFC8572,
> "Secure Zero Touch Provisioning (SZTP)".
> 
> --------------------------------------
> You may review the report below and at:
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/errata/eid6616
> 
> --------------------------------------
> Type: Editorial
> Reported by: Srihari Ramanathan <sramanathan@google.com>
> 
> Section: 4.2.3
> 
> Original Text
> -------------
>   For device-independent queries, the three bootstrapping artifacts
>   defined in Section 3 are encoded into the SVR records as follows.
> 
>   Artifact to SRV Record Mapping:
> 
>      Conveyed Information:  This artifact is not supported directly.
>         Instead, the essence of unsigned redirect information is mapped
>         to SVR records per [RFC2782].
> 
> Corrected Text
> --------------
>   For device-independent queries, the three bootstrapping artifacts
>   defined in Section 3 are encoded into the SRV records as follows.
> 
>   Artifact to SRV Record Mapping:
> 
>      Conveyed Information:  This artifact is not supported directly.
>         Instead, the essence of unsigned redirect information is mapped
>         to SRV records per [RFC2782].
> 
> Notes
> -----
> I believe both "SVR" are typos?
> 
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> --------------------------------------
> RFC8572 (draft-ietf-netconf-zerotouch-29)
> --------------------------------------
> Title               : Secure Zero Touch Provisioning (SZTP)
> Publication Date    : April 2019
> Author(s)           : K. Watsen, I. Farrer, M. Abrahamsson
> Category            : PROPOSED STANDARD
> Source              : Network Configuration
> Area                : Operations and Management
> Stream              : IETF
> Verifying Party     : IESG

[netconf] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC8572 (66… RFC Errata System
Re: [netconf] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC8572… Kent Watsen
Re: [netconf] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC8572… Rob Wilton (rwilton)