Re: [netconf] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC8639 (6366)

"John R. Levine" <johnl@iecc.com> Thu, 24 December 2020 19:00 UTC

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From: "John R. Levine" <johnl@iecc.com>
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Subject: Re: [netconf] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC8639 (6366)
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This is a limitation of the script that mechanically generates HTML from 
legacy text RFCs.  There are no hyperlinks in the RFC itself.  Reject, please.

On Thu, 24 Dec 2020, RFC Errata System wrote:

> The following errata report has been submitted for RFC8639,
> "Subscription to YANG Notifications".
>
> --------------------------------------
> You may review the report below and at:
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/errata/eid6366
>
> --------------------------------------
> Type: Editorial
> Reported by: Muly Ilan <muly_i@rad.com>
>
> Section: 4.
>
> Original Text
> -------------
>  feature subtree {
>    description
>      "This feature indicates support for YANG subtree filtering.";
>    reference
>      "RFC 6241: Network Configuration Protocol (NETCONF),
>                 Section 6";
>  }
>
>  feature supports-vrf {
>    description
>      "This feature indicates that a publisher supports VRF
>       configuration for configured subscriptions.  VRF support for
>       dynamic subscriptions does not require this feature.";
>    reference
>      "RFC 8529: YANG Data Model for Network Instances,
>                 Section 6";
>  }
>
> Corrected Text
> --------------
>  feature subtree {
>    description
>      "This feature indicates support for YANG subtree filtering.";
>    reference
>      "RFC 6241: Network Configuration Protocol (NETCONF),
>                 Section 6";
>  }
>
>  feature supports-vrf {
>    description
>      "This feature indicates that a publisher supports VRF
>       configuration for configured subscriptions.  VRF support for
>       dynamic subscriptions does not require this feature.";
>    reference
>      "RFC 8529: YANG Data Model for Network Instances,
>                 Section 6";
>  }
>
> Notes
> -----
> In the HTML version the two hyperlinks "Section 6" (for 'subtree' feature and for 'supports-vrf' feature) point to wrong RFCs.
>
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>
> --------------------------------------
> RFC8639 (draft-ietf-netconf-subscribed-notifications-26)
> --------------------------------------
> Title               : Subscription to YANG Notifications
> Publication Date    : September 2019
> Author(s)           : E. Voit, A. Clemm, A. Gonzalez Prieto, E. Nilsen-Nygaard, A. Tripathy
> Category            : PROPOSED STANDARD
> Source              : Network Configuration
> Area                : Operations and Management
> Stream              : IETF
> Verifying Party     : IESG
>

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