[Netconf] Fwd: [Technical Errata Reported] RFC5717 (2657)

["Bert (IETF) Wijnen" <[e-mail]>]

FYI, I did not see this reflected on our WG mailing list.

Martin, can you have a first look at this, since Balazs is
not following thiss as closely anymore as he used to do.

Bert

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Subject: 	[Technical Errata Reported] RFC5717 (2657)
Date: 	Thu, 2 Dec 2010 21:30:01 -0800 (PST)
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The following errata report has been submitted for RFC5717,
"Partial Lock Remote Procedure Call (RPC) for NETCONF".

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You may review the report below and at:
http://www.rfc-editor.org/errata_search.php?rfc=5717&eid=2657

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Type: Technical
Reported by: B Viswanath Reddy<[e-mail]>

Section: Appendix C

Original Text
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Step 6 - Lock user Joe



    <nc:rpc

      xmlns:nc="urn:ietf:params:xml:ns:netconf:base:1.0"

      xmlns="urn:ietf:params:xml:ns:netconf:partial-lock:1.0"

          message-id="104">

      <partial-lock>

        <select xmlns:usr="http://example.com/users">

|         /usr:top/usr:users/user[usr:name="Joe"]"

        </select>

      </partial-lock>

    </nc:rpc>



    The NETCONF server grants the partial lock.  The scope of this second

    lock includes only the<user>  node with name Joe.  The lock protects

    all data below this particular<user>  node.



    Step 7 - Receive lock



    <nc:rpc-reply

      xmlns:nc="urn:ietf:params:xml:ns:netconf:base:1.0"

      xmlns="urn:ietf:params:xml:ns:netconf:partial-lock:1.0"

      message-id="104">

        <lock-id>2</lock-id>

        <locked-node xmlns:usr="http://example.com/users">

|           /usr:top/usr:users/user[usr:name="Joe"]"

        </locked-node>

    </nc:rpc-reply>



Corrected Text
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Step 6 - Lock user Joe



    <nc:rpc

      xmlns:nc="urn:ietf:params:xml:ns:netconf:base:1.0"

      xmlns="urn:ietf:params:xml:ns:netconf:partial-lock:1.0"

          message-id="104">

      <partial-lock>

        <select xmlns:usr="http://example.com/users">

|         /usr:top/usr:users/usr:user[usr:name="Joe"]"

        </select>

      </partial-lock>

    </nc:rpc>



    The NETCONF server grants the partial lock.  The scope of this second

    lock includes only the<user>  node with name Joe.  The lock protects

    all data below this particular<user>  node.



    Step 7 - Receive lock



    <nc:rpc-reply

      xmlns:nc="urn:ietf:params:xml:ns:netconf:base:1.0"

      xmlns="urn:ietf:params:xml:ns:netconf:partial-lock:1.0"

      message-id="104">

        <lock-id>2</lock-id>

        <locked-node xmlns:usr="http://example.com/users">

|           /usr:top/usr:users/usr:user[usr:name="Joe"]"

        </locked-node>

    </nc:rpc-reply>



Notes
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The instance identifier /usr:top/usr:users/user[usr:name="Joe"]" must be replaced with /usr:top/usr:users/usr:user[usr:name="Joe"]"

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RFC5717 (draft-ietf-netconf-partial-lock-11)
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Title               : Partial Lock Remote Procedure Call (RPC) for NETCONF
Publication Date    : December 2009
Author(s)           : B. Lengyel, M. Bjorklund
Category            : PROPOSED STANDARD
Source              : Network Configuration
Area                : Operations and Management
Stream              : IETF
Verifying Party     : IESG