Re: [netconf] WGLC for draft-ietf-netconf-notification-capabilities

Balázs Lengyel <balazs.lengyel@ericsson.com> Tue, 05 November 2019 14:50 UTC

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To: Kent Watsen <kent+ietf@watsen.net>
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Subject: Re: [netconf] WGLC for draft-ietf-netconf-notification-capabilities
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Sorry for the missed updates. I corrected them.

Balazs

 

From: Kent Watsen <kent+ietf@watsen.net> 
Sent: 2019. november 1., péntek 16:38
To: Balázs Lengyel <balazs.lengyel@ericsson.com>
Cc: Eric Voit (evoit) <evoit@cisco.com>om>; Mahesh Jethanandani <mjethanandani@gmail.com>om>; Alexander Clemm <ludwig@clemm.org>rg>; Benoit Claise <bclaise@cisco.com>om>; netconf@ietf.org
Subject: Re: [netconf] WGLC for draft-ietf-netconf-notification-capabilities

 

Hi Balazs,

 

Hello,

I added  your comments to the upcoming next version of the draft.

Regards Balazs

 

Your update missed a couple nits (see below).

 

Kent // contributor

 

 

 

 

BALAZS2: OK,  Updated with first part, but Rob has asked for an extra sentence about the dangers of revealing read-only data, I added that too.

“All protocol-accessible data are read-only and cannot be modified. 

        The data in this module is not security sensitive.

        Access control may be configured, to avoid exposing 

        the read-only data.”

Okay.  s/protocol-accessible data/protocol-accessible data nodes/

BALAZS: OK, corrected.

 

 

 





BALAZS2: Agreed. This is part of normal file handling, transport. So I reworded this to:

“When that data is in file format, data should be protected against 

        modification or unauthorized access using normal file handling and 

        secure and mutually authenticated file transport mechanisms.”

 

Okay.  The end can be shortened, i.e., just "file handling mechanisms".

BALAZS: OK, corrected.

 

Kent