[netconf] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC8650 (6369)

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The following errata report has been submitted for RFC8650,
"Dynamic Subscription to YANG Events and Datastores over RESTCONF".

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You may review the report below and at:
https://www.rfc-editor.org/errata/eid6369

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Type: Editorial
Reported by: Muly Ilan <muly_i@rad.com>

Section: A.2.1

Original Text
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A.2.1.  "subscription-modified"

   A "subscription-modified" encoded in JSON would look like:

   {
     "ietf-restconf:notification" : {
       "eventTime": "2007-09-01T10:00:00Z",
       "ietf-subscribed-notifications:subscription-modified": {
         "id": 39,
         "uri": "https://example.com/restconf/subscriptions/22"
         "stream-xpath-filter": "/example-module:foo",
         "stream": {
            "ietf-netconf-subscribed-notifications" : "NETCONF"
         }
       }
     }
   }

Corrected Text
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A.2.1.  "subscription-modified"

   A "subscription-modified" encoded in JSON would look like:

   {
     "ietf-restconf:notification" : {
       "eventTime": "2007-09-01T10:00:00Z",
       "ietf-subscribed-notifications:subscription-modified": {
         "id": 39,
         "uri": "https://example.com/restconf/subscriptions/39"
         "stream-xpath-filter": "/example-module:foo",
         "stream": {
            "ietf-netconf-subscribed-notifications" : "NETCONF"
         }
       }
     }
   }

Notes
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Change the URI to match the ID.

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RFC8650 (draft-ietf-netconf-restconf-notif-15)
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Title               : Dynamic Subscription to YANG Events and Datastores over RESTCONF
Publication Date    : November 2019
Author(s)           : E. Voit, R. Rahman, E. Nilsen-Nygaard, A. Clemm, A. Bierman
Category            : PROPOSED STANDARD
Source              : Network Configuration
Area                : Operations and Management
Stream              : IETF
Verifying Party     : IESG